Aspa the Loner [Revision complete]

Posts : 549 Points : 95 Age : 25

» Name: Aspa
» Sex: Female
» Age: One year, four months
» Appearance: Aspa is a slender but average-built she-cat. Her fur short and white with gray splotches, her eyes are a light pine green, and her nose is dark gray. Since she has somewhat short legs compared to other cats, she isn't the best at running and leaping; however, she is rather skilled at climbing trees, Twoleg fences, etc., but not so much cliff-like, rocky terrain.
» Personality: She tends to keep to herself, but only because of her low self-confidence and self-esteem. It takes a lot for her to get comfortable enough around you for her to start talking to you. She has always been like this, and it most likely stems from never being close to any cat since her birth. She never had any real experience communicating with others. She had a family, sort of, but they weren't a very good one; they weren't abusive or anything like that, except they neglected her of things like kindness and love and closeness.
Something relating to her personality that's a bit more positive. She had always been fascinated with the art of healing with medicinal herbs, and hopes to be able to improve upon this skill somehow, except she doesn't really have the ability to do this without practicing it on other cats. And she never had encountered any cats who had need for medical attention, nor was she ever in a group of cats she had been comfortable enough with to practice it on (also, she didn't know much about it while she was still living with her family).
» Clan and Rank: No allegiances; loner
» History: Before going off on her own, though, Aspa lived with her mother and her brother and sister. As soon as she was mature enough to hunt for herself and take care of herself in general, she left them. Now that she is on her own, she is literally on her own, and hasn't lived for a long period of time with anyone ever since. Currently, she lives in an old badger set.
» Other: --
» Roleplay Sample: -- (Second character)

Subject: Re: Aspa the Loner [Revision complete] Sun Sep 08, 2013 7:31 pm

Please improve upon her personality and history.
Personality: How exactly is she "odd"? She can appear mysterious to other cats, but I would like you to flesh her out a bit more before I approve her.
History: I'd like to know more about her family life. Is there a reason why she became anti-social? Did she have good parents? Was she abandoned? How did she get the personality that she has today?

Posts : 549 Points : 95 Age : 25

Thanks for the suggestions and prompts. c:
Sorry I lacked information in those fields. I was in a rush when I was creating the first version of the template, and I thought I could maybe get away with what I had. xD Probably should've kept "WIP" in the title.
Anyways, I kinda completely changed her personality and history in the process of fixing it. I'm probably not going to apply her as one of the prophesy characters if she gets accepted, because I can barely handle what I've already got.
But I think it's a lot better now. At least... I do. o.o' I hope it's a little better now.

Subject: Re: Aspa the Loner [Revision complete] Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:58 pm

Approved, thanks for making the changes. Very Happy

Remember to update your character records and happy roleplaying.

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